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Mitch,
From briefly skimming your I-search I understood why you choose your I-search as what you are most proud of. It was clear you put effort into that piece. The letter had a couple grammar issues that I noticed, but overall it seems like you have improved in English this year a lot!!

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I'm going to have to agree with Brendan here, your sentences seemed a bit rushed but overall very well done. A+ for effort

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Your grammar is great, but I believe that you could use better sentence fluency because some of the sentences are a little choppy. Other than that though I enjoyed reading your progression over the year.
Brendan Mercier

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Mitch seems to be putting more effort into his language arts. There has been improvement from the beginning of the year.
Dyana Rossignol

{To Kill a Mockingbird.pages}
This is the very first quotation analysis I did this year. It was my first time actually reading something over multiple times and trying to pull meaning out of it. It was done at the begining of the year, but it is still a decent piece of writing.

{Tom's Kid.pages}
This is a piece of writing I did probably a little over a quarter of the way through the year. It is a letter written by me as if I were one of Tom Robinson's kids from To Kill a Mockingbird. I think this piece is an improvement over Peak because I had a little more experience as a writer. As it is not an amazing piece of writing, it does show improvement.

{Romeo and Juliet.pages}
This piece of writing was written at the very end of the year. This shows how much I have improved over the year. It is a piece talking about the theme of the play Romeo and Juliet and giving reasons as to why I thought Friar Lawrence was the most at fault in this tragedy. In this essay I have to use text based evidence in my argument as to why Friar Lawrence is to blame for all of the tragic endings characters meet in the play. To me this is one of my most well written essays and I believe it is a shining example of what I have become as a writer.